Someone explain to me,
How could it end up like this
I thought I knew how to move on
Yet what I did was all wrong
My heart ended up in your arms again
When i realized,it was too late
My heart never healed, but i had you break it again
The difference with our hearts
Yours is cold, and mine is full of pain
Even though you know how i felt
You act as if there was none
Everything I do will never be enough
I hope you find a man who'll make you happy
I tried to be that man, but I won't ever be
I just can't be.
There is no time to make the same mistake
If i learned, then i'll walk away
I'll shed all the pain
I won't be holding on
And everything i felt for you is gone
It’s too late to turn it around
So this time it really is goodbye
Its finally clear to me
It's not you I'm meant for
And I just don't love you anymore
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Something different to my usual writing style
Not much rhythm, nor rhyme
Some stuff i wanted to say.
Thanks for reading.
If your somehow interested at reading my older stuff, you can find it here
www.adikparinsayo.blogspot.com
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The most important aspect in writing is putting into words what the heart wants to say. It doesn't need to rhyme or even use beautiful words.. as long as it comes from the writer's heart, it can touch anyone who would read it. Be confident in your writing. It's really good^^
It's not really true that you don't love that person anymore.. It's just that you don't love her just as much as before. It's really hard to move on. I agree on that but you have to.^^ That's life. It took me years to do that so take your time^^
hey thanks sa comments :)
I do agree na whats important is to say (or make the reader) feel what you want him/her to feel maybe it through rhymes or no such thing at all
For me,the most rewarding part in writing is someone being touched by your works :)
I'm not too confident in my writing to be honest, I had the courage to give it sa isang girl, and I dunno how she really reacted. So I don't really know, maybe that would have made me confident lol
@2nd comment
Medyo nakapag move on na rin ako sa kanya, its been a few months. Actually for a fact, this site (or mostly whats written) is like a story in itself on how I met this girl and what happened after =))
I don't even know if she knew if this existed =/
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